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Daddy's Womb MAG
April 23, 2008
i asked my father if i could swim,
and he said that i would drown.
The Sea would imprison me – he said
if my feet had left the ground.
So i walked out to the water,
and cried out – how ’bout now!
He said, a little bit further, Son,
and then you’ll leave the ground.
i stepped on sand then stone,
from hollow ground to sturdy.
The sky was at my level as I
gazed at the birdie.
The Sea brought me a new idea,
the urge to flee to the high.
i asked my Father if i could fly,
and he said, sure, Son – go try.
i jumped as high as i could.
Still, i landed on the ground.
i saw my Father pull on a chain,
then i knew that i was bound.
© Anonymous
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on Aug. 5 2020 at 9:06 pm
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Wow that last part in particular was a really great choice of language. Woah, good job, author!
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on Nov. 17 2019 at 11:06 pm
Those last few lines- ouch. What a twist.
Great poem though, really makes you think.
Great poem though, really makes you think.
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on Oct. 4 2019 at 9:59 am
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on Sep. 30 2019 at 2:58 pm
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