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I Can't Escape my Own Mind

November 7, 2016
By Heather03 SILVER, Conway, South Carolina
Heather03 SILVER, Conway, South Carolina
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I'm a stranger

Trapped in my own mind

Trying to escape this Black Hole

I call Life...

I sit and watch as the blood trickles down my arm

Trapped in a world where all you see is harm

Wishing times would change

Doomed is what I am...BANG

The gun in my hand, the bullet in my head

Slowly fading away until I am dead.

Wondering as the last moments go by...

How many deaths of teenagers have to happen so people bat an eye?

Bullying is all I knew, self-harm and violence

Make a change, I beg of you, Please!

That way more and more people dont end up like me...


The author's comments:

WARNING: This poem is dark and depressing, if you are personally dealing with something like suicide or self harm please call a help support system and do not read!


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on Mar. 20 2017 at 10:11 am
Heather03 SILVER, Conway, South Carolina
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Oh my gosh that means so much!! Thank you!

on Mar. 19 2017 at 8:19 pm
WolfWhisperer0911 BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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Holy c**p this is so powerful and dark! Amazing job and that is what I call poetry. Keep up the good work!

on Nov. 11 2016 at 1:49 pm
Heather03 SILVER, Conway, South Carolina
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Thanks so much!! It means a lot!

on Nov. 11 2016 at 1:49 pm
Heather03 SILVER, Conway, South Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments
Oh my gosh thanks so much! I love feedback from readers!

on Nov. 11 2016 at 10:24 am
happymoment........ BRONZE, Kerala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Always be happy"

really nice...made a good feeling...seriously it's a kind of professional one.....

on Nov. 11 2016 at 10:05 am
Thisisreal_life PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;so do it. Decide. Is this the person you want to be? Is this the life you want to live? Is this the best you can be?&quot;<br /> &quot;I survived the fire because the fire within me burns brighter than the one around me&quot;

I personally love deep and depressing stories, and I think this was very well written. Keep writing!!