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November 20, 2012
By Faize BRONZE, Bennington, Kansas
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I will not fall
I shall build my wall.
you shall not see the pain in my eyes
maybe when my body dies.
nothing is as it seems
you cannot know i am torn at the seams
I can't forget your love for me
I held it for all to see.
I refuse to let go
i must die if i do so.
I will fight for you until I die
and rejoice when i let out my final sigh.
until i feel your love again. I cannot recover
Because of you i am torn asunder.

© Brian B.,Highland Village, TX

The author's comments:
i wrote this on November 19, 2012 ( date of the submission) and this is simply just my feelings on something that has happened to me recently. i just started writing and this came out of it.
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kyoko711 said...
on Jan. 27 2013 at 1:09 am
Woah man! this is really good~! I am going to have to read more. you got some skill kid :P