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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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This article has 1558 comments.
cass said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 3:51 pm
i completely loved this poem. i relate too : ) you are great and you captured everything in one poem congrats!!!!
girloverlikeduh said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:22 am
I like how the writer expresses with creative words and how she (writer) herself in it too.
bubbles15 said...
on Jan. 14 2010 at 10:20 am
wow...i like totally feel u on this!! wow this touched me and my memories O.O
MaxRideFan17 said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 4:58 pm
I feel the same way about someone but didn't know how to express it. Beautiful! Perfect imagery too. I loved it!
Poetry in Motion said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 3:57 pm
It is so great
brookieboo said...
on Jan. 13 2010 at 1:40 pm
i absolutely love this and can relate to it
music_lover PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 7 2010 at 11:30 am
Nice description.... I like how you say, 'you precious jerk'. That is very descriptive and shows just how you feel. Nice job!
MarinaNicole SILVER said...
on Jan. 5 2010 at 10:15 pm
This reminds me of a certain someone-- it's so friggin true dude. It's a great poem too, I'm glad it's in the magazine. You weren't one of those people who only rhyme for the sake of rhyming; it was cohesive. Anyways, really, really awesome.
MatthewZ said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 8:05 pm
nice! look at my poem too plz? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/free_verse/article/156195/Airplanes/ rate and comment plz! thanks a million!
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Jan. 4 2010 at 2:51 pm
oh my word this is amazing
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