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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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Two_Hands_And_A_Heart BRONZE said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 2:02 pm
Fantastic!
EmilyKnowlton GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 1:49 pm
Brilliant. Simply Brilliant. I love this so much. I know a guy just like this, I can relate so well.
Alex_Durham GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 1:29 pm
This is great!
introducingshelby GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 12:51 pm
You speak the truth...
inkflowerKNC said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 2:33 pm
this actually made me laugh. in a good way. i like it because its realistic. :D
brender1017 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 12:19 pm
i lie this and i can so relate to it !! i loved this !!
PassionFruit SILVER said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 5:05 pm
I like it, simple yet strong. As you can tell, a lot of people can relate, including myself :) It reads smoothly and inspires emotion in the reader, makes the poem feel personal. Great job!
RanaHewezi1998 SILVER said...
on Jun. 4 2011 at 11:17 am
that's a really good peom and its deep and personal which makes it all the best!
IDKXmere13 SILVER said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 6:41 pm
Aww this is really good! :) i have a jerk with brown hair that im in love with too! :)
shinegirl24 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 12:28 pm
Aw.... I really like this. Nice job!
forever.dancing SILVER said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 11:08 am
soooooooo cute :)
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i love the line ' your love does kill the things i hold so close to me'
this is very poetic and relatable, i loved it!